Teachers Feedback

Front Cover -
- more emphasis on the masthead
- check spelling
- decided whether I want the guitar in the shot
- add a bar code
- better separation between the model and the background [ layer model onto background so you can change opacity of background ]


Double Page Spread -
- add more to article
- article is 'wish washy' and young tone to it


Contents -
- spelling
- make page numbers fit contents
- too much blank space, use pictures to fill space
- have numbers on pictures to relate to each other


I think I need to concentrate on the article to make it more grown up and more interesting for the reader.
I also think that it might be better to have just one page on the contents, therefore there will hopefully be not alot of un-filled space making it look bare. I think I will have to keep checking my work over and over to make sure I do not have small spelling mistakes in my work as it will look un-proffesional. 
I think the picture on my front cover could be changed to a more grown up pictures, because as i've looking through my work i do feel the magazine had a 'childish' tone to it, as my feedback has made me realise this.


The feedback I recieved has helped me a lot to look back on my work and change parts which do not work well.